Setting
The setting of the story took place at a wild and rocky bay which was closer to the big beach.It happened during summer holiday.
Main Character
The main character is a young English boy called Jerry.He was eleven years old by then and the only child of a widowed mother.He is a boy who spent much of his time playing on the beach.His hobby used to be swimming.In fact,he was a good a swimmer.Jerry could go to the bay almost everyday and dive in the water and start swimming.He and his mother stayed at the villa which was on the shore of the beach for the holiday.He was one of a kind who liked making friendship with others.Even on that bay,he tried to keep close with boys that were older than him although they tried to ignore him.Jerry would not give up the sport he liked best even when at some point he failed to do what the other boys were capable of doing.
Plot
To summarise the story,Jerry and his mother went on the holiday that they could spend on the beach in summer.His mother had lost her husband and Jerry was her only child.As for her,she was worried whenever she was not with him.At only eleven years old,Jerry would go to the wild and rocky bay where he could dive in the water and start swimming.There was a day a group of boys came to the same bay and start swimming.They could swim past the tunnel of one big dark rock and come out on the other end of it . John felt embarrased to see this because it was something he could'nt do at first.After days of practising and a day before they could go home,he thought he could do what those boys did.To swim through the same tunnel of that rock and come out on the other end was his dream and he could finally achieve it.He has to be faced with many obstacles through the tunnel.The water pushed him against the roof of the tunnel and it was sharp and painful.His head knocked against something which made him dizzy and he struggled passionately as he was running out of air.Also,his nose bled as a result.All in all,it was a sign of victory in the end,he could possibly do what those big boys who were older than him did.His mother knew that her son,Jerry could really swim and yes,it was of great importance to go to the bay from that day.
I will give you a 9\10 because all the questions are answered correctly and you do not have any errors.you used too long sentences on the setting.
ReplyDeleteThis is great work Romeo. Will give you 8/10. You really understood the story.
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ReplyDeleteYour description is only for one character and not both. OTHERWISE Every-other-thing is fine, keep it good!!